Guitar riff ive been working on

[SiC THEPRO1121]

https://soundcloud.com/devin-sackaney/new-song-intro

this is a guitar riff ive been working on,

ive been playing guitar for 3 years and im 16.

pretty good guitar riff xD

anything to improve on? feedback plz

 

[SIC Avenged]

not bad i just dont like the palm or fret mutes whatever thtey are example at 19 seconds they seem like you just threw them in there to change it up they dont sound like they belong but remember its only my opinoin i played for about 4 yrs then stoped so im no pro

 

[SiC THEPRO1121]

thanks avenged,

i was not sure about those muted notes that i added in, the riff sound a little wierd without them.

im going to try to think of something to transition back to the start of the riff xD

 

[SIC Avenged]

have u tried adding more in maybe it sound better that way they just sounded random to me....like u added them to make it more spiffy like i said jsut a opinion

 

[Pain Sherman]

Good, keep it up!!

https://soundcloud.com/devin-sackaney/new-song-intro

this is a guitar riff ive been working on,

ive been playing guitar for 3 years and im 16.

pretty good guitar riff xD

anything to improve on? feedback plz

I've been playing the guitar for almost ten years and stopped playing it for almost 2 due to an accident. So I'm kinda rusty but whatever. I must say that this sounds pretty good to me, you just have to work on your picking skills in order to get a natural sound because in some parts you tend to force the riff but the fact that you compose your own stuff makes you an advanced/excellent guitar player

 

[GUL74]

Re: Good, keep it up!!

https://soundcloud.com/devin-sackaney/new-song-intro

this is a guitar riff ive been working on,

ive been playing guitar for 3 years and im 16.

pretty good guitar riff xD

anything to improve on? feedback plz

I've been playing the guitar for almost ten years and stopped playing it for almost 2 due to an accident. So I'm kinda rusty but whatever. I must say that this sounds pretty good to me, you just have to work on your picking skills in order to get a natural sound because in some parts you tend to force the riff but the fact that you compose your own stuff makes you an advanced/excellent guitar player

I agree with Pain Sherman just work on your picking other than that it sounds good.. What was gear are using ?

 

[SiC THEPRO1121]

Re: Good, keep it up!!

https://soundcloud.com/devin-sackaney/new-song-intro

this is a guitar riff ive been working on,

ive been playing guitar for 3 years and im 16.

pretty good guitar riff xD

anything to improve on? feedback plz

I've been playing the guitar for almost ten years and stopped playing it for almost 2 due to an accident. So I'm kinda rusty but whatever. I must say that this sounds pretty good to me, you just have to work on your picking skills in order to get a natural sound because in some parts you tend to force the riff but the fact that you compose your own stuff makes you an advanced/excellent guitar player

I agree with Pain Sherman just work on your picking other than that it sounds good.. What was gear are using ?

thanks sherman and GUL74,

i think i have alot of feedback to improve this riff, im going to practice my picking techniqe, even though i dont really look at my picking hand.

sherman, what happened to your hand(s)? i cannot imagine not being able to play guitar :O

 

[Pain Sherman]

Yep

Hell yeah keep rocking and working on your riffs dude. I've been listening to them on your Soundcloud page, pretty good stuff you have there.

Nothing happened to my hands I just had a car accident in 2009 (December) and forgot how to do some things, it was a long recovery. In 2011 (June) I was able to remember my name and home address without using a note pad, sticky notes, etc. So it was kinda hard to play the guitar when you forgot how to do it, but Im fine now

 

[SiC THEPRO1121]

Re: Yep

Hell yeah keep rocking and working on your riffs dude. I've been listening to them on your Soundcloud page, pretty good stuff you have there.

Nothing happened to my hands I just had a car accident in 2009 (December) and forgot how to do some things, it was a long recovery. In 2011 (June) I was able to remember my name and home address without using a note pad, sticky notes, etc. So it was kinda hard to play the guitar when you forgot how to do it, but Im fine now

its good that you recovered well xD

thanks for all the feedback

 

[GUL74]

Re: Yep

Hell yeah keep rocking and working on your riffs dude. I've been listening to them on your Soundcloud page, pretty good stuff you have there.

Nothing happened to my hands I just had a car accident in 2009 (December) and forgot how to do some things, it was a long recovery. In 2011 (June) I was able to remember my name and home address without using a note pad, sticky notes, etc. So it was kinda hard to play the guitar when you forgot how to do it, but Im fine now

wow that crazy glad you ok now